On a Friday afternoon

Hey people! I wore this poem in two parts – the first part in the afternoon and the second part in the evening after I got up from a very unsatisfying partial slumber! Anyways I am posting it and I am open to all your criticisms and comments (in fact I am looking forward to hearing it!)

I am writing to you,

Not to say,

The weather is beautiful,

I long to walk, anywhere far,

With you by my side,

Holding hands and leaving burdensome thoughts,

With their burdensome owners.

Not to say,

I love yesterday's moon,

Loved it so much that I think,

We should make it our home,

Whose surface has seen no blood or hate.

Not to say,

I detest whatever I see,

This great bazaar we call life,

Where even air has a price,

And everyone is yet another

Faceless mannequin, a product up for sale.

Not to say,

I hate fat faced men,

Who speak of chastity,

Sleeping with the devil behind closed doors.

I hate them as much as I love you.

But to say,

I love you,

to say the world is ugly,

but your beautiful,

more so than you know,

than you will ever know.

Yup it is lame but i gotta keep the blog alive!!!

Please comment! Cya :-)

just another post!

hey people :-)
Me feeling bored so i scrubbed something down. It is lame like always but since I haven't posted anything in a while,I thought I would share this with you guys, by guys i mean the 5 or less people that -
a. read due to pity
b. have accidentally stumbled upon this page
:-)

I could not think of a title but if u guys come up with something I will be happy to hear it :-)

if all the smiley faces,
frown at me,
will i become refuse?
will i be another mistake?

in Sarcasm and hollow joy.
my face is hidden,
one day if it surfaces,
will i hear you say good bye?

hey babes did i tell you?
did i tell you, i burn on Saturday nights,
when i am near neon lights or disco balls,
so ... what does that make you wanna say?

if i tell you my soul is lost,
the day compassion fled humanity,
will you see anything left to love,
in a shell that is now empty?

every cosmic revolution,
binds me to you,
will this suffocate,
or nurture you?


all comments will be happily read :-)