hope? or my burning soul?

I totally suck at poetry and this is probably one of the worst poems ever but i taught i would share it with you, anyways . . .

lost in the labyrinth of senses,
the end tormentingly far,
this Stygian tunnel's escape,
like, glowing coal on the night's sand.

what do i see?

hope?
or
my burning soul?

3 comments:

Ramy said...

nice 1.

Anonymous said...

Duly topic

Anonymous said...

And on what we shall stop?